Updated: May 24
Chapter 20, p56 & 57
In this chapter Mr King speaks of an article, his first article, as having been reviewed. He adds a summary review of the article with the edits, as he remembers them, in place. He clearly understood that he was being asked to exclude modifiers and just use facts.
While I’m not all too proud about this, that is what I tried to do in my book, unsuccessfully.
im told it translates more as the summary of a first person journal than a story. I’ll consider this a lesson learned the hard way.
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